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In some countries, workers have to retire when they reach a certain age, such as 65.in other parts of the word, they are encouraged to continue working for as long as they want .Discuss these two options and decide which is the better alternative

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Many societies have a retirement
age
 of 65, while others do not have a retirement
age
 limit unless there is a viable alternative.
Although
 65 is an appropriate retirement
age
, the ability of the individual to
work
 should not be ignored.  Due to
this
, there are many factors that influence working
such
 as
age
, stress, tendency, and so on. As life is quite hectic in most developing countries these days, it is fair to consider an
age
 for terminating employment. There is an indisputable relationship between
age
 and job efficiency. In Iran,
for instance
, the maximum
age
 for working in government offices is 65 and after that,
employees
 are required to retire due to their diminished capacity to continue their
work
.  
Conversely
, in some developed countries, people enjoy
a
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stable mental and physical conditions, so officials are of the opinion that underestimating the importance of experience is unlogical, and they allow workers to remain employed as long as they transfer their knowledge and experience to the new
employees
. In Canada,
for example
,
employees
 are encouraged to continue their
work
 while training new
employees
.  For some people, there is a legal limit on the
age
 at which they can retire. My opinion is that there is a great difference between people's abilities and their circumstances, and it is better to continue the
work
 as long as the individuals are capable of staying at
work
 and are willing to do so.
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