Companies Sponsoring Sports Events for Advertising Purposes

There is no doubt that these days spread widely about
advertising
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of
spotrs
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sports
sport
sponsoring .The question is, how effect
sport
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sports
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sponsor
in
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players
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I am
am
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I am
going to discuss
about
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both
side
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. in terms of
positive
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side
sidre
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,
sport sponsoring
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advertising has more benefits for
players
.the main reason
given
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to support
this
claim
that is
that
sport
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sports
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teams or
players
are given free equipment which they could not afford
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otherwise
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other wise
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. To
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illustrate
illiustrate
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illustrate
sponsoring advertising of Real
madrid
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by
Qater
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Qatar
Airplan and other
companies
.
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,
players
can focus on their
sport
instead
of begin distracted by financial worries and that gives a good match .
However
,some
companies
have many negative aspects .
firstly
some
companies
avertising
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advertising
products harmful to health.In
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other
oher
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word
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,Tobacco
companies
,
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among
other, should not
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allowed
allwed
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to
sponcer
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sponsor
sport
event.
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secondary
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the
companies
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company's
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reputation
reputatin
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reputation
can be tightly linked to
players
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players'
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reputation
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reputations
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.
This
is be
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couse
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cause
a player who
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does
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dose
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does
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drug
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drugs
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or
misbeves
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misbehaves
will have negative consequences for the
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company
compay
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company
and vice versa. In
conclusion
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it is
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evident
evidence
evidents
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evident
that
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advancers
adventures
advanters
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both
sponsorsport
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sponsor sport
event
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events
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.
Ministry
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The Ministry
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of
sport
must ensure steps are taken to prevent
this
phenomenon from deteriorating future.
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