LETTER OF APOLOGY Topic 3: You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change. Write at least 150 words.

#apology #topic #mistake #classroom #teacher #situation #promise #change

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Mr Paul, Good afternoon. I am writing you

this

letter to say how sorry I am about the incident that occurred yesterday during lunch. Please, pardon my error which was due to my poor mental health condition at the time. It must have been about 2pm when I heard your voice instructing all students to leave the canteen hall in order to assemble at the auditorium before 3pm. I got the information quite all right but decided not to leave the eating area.

This

kind of behaviour is obviously wrong for anyone, most especially coming from a student. It is outright disrespect. After having a re-think of how I acted the previous day, I have come to realize my wrongdoing. I sincerely regret the incident and have made up my mind to be of good conduct henceforth. I promise to adhere to every instruction issued by all teachers including you. I am,

therefore

, making a commitment to never disrespect you or anyone ever again. I hope you will find my apology sincere and you will be able to forgive my wrongdoing. Yours sincerely, Harry.

Submitted by iorwes365 on Thu Nov 03 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

185 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

sincerest apologies
responsible for
acknowledgment
integrity
introspect
disruption
self-awareness
repercussions
concrete steps
amends
adhering to
commitment

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4
band
The ling graph below shoes the percentage of tourists of Schtland who visited for different attractions in Edinburgh.
The line chart depicts proportions of consumers for different community facilities in Edinburgh such as aquariums, castles, zoos, and festival Scotland for a span of 30 years between 1980 and 2010.
5
band
Below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year iy the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ie comparisons where relevant.
The table compares average amount of time not-working people spent on their spare time activities during last year.
6
band
The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
t is argued that the benefits of English becoming the lingua franca are more significant than its drawbacks. Although this tendency can pose a threat to some minority languages, I mostly agree with this notion since it facilitates smoother communication and employment opportunities.
8.5
band
Lately, your company has informed you that you will be taking a lead role in an upcoming management project. Write a letter to a senior asking for guidance and request him/her to share his/her experience with you.
Hope you are doing well.
5
band
many people work long hour leaving very little time to leisure activities.what are the advantage and disadvantage
In the modern world, many people devote maximum time to work which leaves them with very limited free time. In my opinion, the disadvantages of this situation outweigh the advantages.

LETTER OF APOLOGY Topic 3: You made a mistake in classroom. Write a letter to your teacher. In the letter: State your apology Describe the situation Write about your promise to change. Write at least 150 words.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

The ling graph below shoes the percentage of tourists of Schtland who visited for different attractions in Edinburgh.

Below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year iy the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ie comparisons where relevant.

The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Lately, your company has informed you that you will be taking a lead role in an upcoming management project. Write a letter to a senior asking for guidance and request him/her to share his/her experience with you.

many people work long hour leaving very little time to leisure activities.what are the advantage and disadvantage