Nowadays government are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than in building New roads........................ Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

In modern times,the issue of governments
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are contribute
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local
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transit like buses and trains unlike
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fresh
pathway
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has become highly controversial.From my perspective, there
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more
advantage
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than drawbacks as
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will outline below
To begin
with,it is a positive sign that
government
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invest
buses
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in buses
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,trains or
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public
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vehicles
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.
Firstly
,
this
process will
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to
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our economic growth to more grow.
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, if there are more transports people will use them more.The resulting rental income will help the economic development of the government.
Secondly
,
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in public Transport will reduce the shortage of vehicles.
Such
as, Due to
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the scarcity
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of vehicles people have to wait for hours on road, wasting their valuable time.
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increasing
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public transport will solve
this
matter.
On the other hand
, people say that the authority is careless
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new road development.
Moreover
, if the government focus on the evolution of new streets ,
then
the problem of traffic jams will be eliminated.
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, Due to
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of roads vehicles have to ply on
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roads, resulting in chaos and jams . In conclusion, parliament are more investing in local
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transportation
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rather than
roadway
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the roadway
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. It is an issue which will continue to demand our attention for the foreseeable future. Undoubtedly road development is important.
However
, vehicle progress is more significant than Streetway
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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