Nowadays government are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than in building New roads........................ Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?
In modern times,the issue of governments
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is
are contribute
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are contributing
local
transit like buses and trains unlike Change preposition
to local
build
fresh Wrong verb form
building
pathway
has become highly controversial.From my perspective, there Fix the agreement mistake
pathways
are
more Change the verb form
is
advantage
than drawbacks as Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
i
will outline below
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I
To begin
with,it is a positive sign that government
invest Correct article usage
the government
buses
,trains or Change preposition
in buses
others
public Correct quantifier usage
other
vehicle
. Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
Firstly
, this
process will helps
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help
to
our economic growth to more grow.Change preposition
apply
For example
, if there are more transports people will use them more.The resulting rental income will help the economic development of the government. Secondly
, Increase
in public Transport will reduce the shortage of vehicles. Correct article usage
an Increase
Such
as, Due to scarcity
of vehicles people have to wait for hours on road, wasting their valuable time. Correct article usage
the scarcity
To
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Increasing
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increase
increasing
public transport will solve Add a comma
,increasing
this
matter.
On the other hand
, people say that the authority is careless to
new road development. Change preposition
about
Moreover
, if the government focus on the evolution of new streets , then
the problem of traffic jams will be eliminated. For instance
, Due to shortage
of roads vehicles have to ply on Correct article usage
a shortage
single lane
roads, resulting in chaos and jams .
In conclusion, parliament are more investing in local Add a hyphen
single-lane
transportations
rather than Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
roadway
. It is an issue which will continue to demand our attention for the foreseeable future. Undoubtedly road development is important. Add an article
the roadway
a roadway
However
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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