Do you agree or disagree?: "Science is better than Religion".

Dear sir/mam, I have received multiple
tickets
at Kinght St/ E 28th Ave. Actually, at my
last
job
all lights were working. Usually I drive my truck during the day and under 160kms
therefore
accidentally I missed to check box lights and I got lighting
tickets
.
This
happened When I tried to put a ramp after I finished my
job
I broke a light wire. I found there was one wire broken underneath the box during the ramp insert. I have fixed it now. Another ticket I fined for improper display of plate but I apologize for that but honestly I really was not aware that I cannot put plate with Zip tie cables. I have fixed it with bolts now.
Moreover
, I
also
got a ticket for not displaying NSC
name
but I am displaying my company
name
on both sides of my
vehicle
and I was not aware that my
name
should be on the
vehicle
if NSC is on my
name
. Now, I have put my NSC
name
on both sides of the
vehicle
. I respect the officer and accept the
tickets
I know I broke some motor
vehicle
laws but In August, I spent around 10,000$ to fix my truck so that I can keep it up to date without any issue (receipts attached). The thing is I have been using
this
truck for moving business for 1 year and until now not running my business successfully. I am doing
this
as a self employed (part time
job
) because I am not getting enough jobs,
therefore
, I
also
do another
job
along with
this
moving service company. Honestly, The ticket’s fine is a lot for me. All I want is if you can forgive me for these
tickets
or reduce my fine will be a lot of help for me. I am going to attach some pictures that I have fixed these errors by myself. I hope you will forgive me for these
tickets
.
Tickets
No.: EA00358921,EA358922, EA00358923 Act or Regulation Section & Contravened :
MR
- 3.02 ,
MR
- 37.071,
MR
- 37.071,
MR
- 4.04(1),
MR
- 4.04(1),
MR
- 4.04(1),
MR
- 4.04(1),
MR
- 4.04(1),
MR
- 4.04(1) Date: 22-09-2022
Name
: Inder Pal Singh Address : 14257 71-A, Avenue Surrey, V3W2L8 D. License No.: 3157262 DOB:15th May 1996 Yours Faithfully, Inder
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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