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Your firend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a email to your friend. In your email * describe where you lived when you were a student at the university * recommend the best way for him/her to look for accomodation * warn him/her of mistakes students make when chhosing accommodation

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Dear Jo, How are you? I am replying back to your request about a place to stay during your course at the university. I have provides all the required
information
 with
this
 email. I was in the same situation when I joined my
master
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 at the university but I was quite lucky that one of my
friend
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 was
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studying
staying
stuying
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studying
 in the same institute so he helped me to find
the
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 apartment near campus. I was able to get a spacious home including various services
such
 as a
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laundry
laundary
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laundry
 machine, refrigerator, air conditioner and internet
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connection
connetion
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connection
.
Moreover
, it was just five minutes walk to reach there, as well as many options available for foods where you can find homemade cuisines. For
you
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you
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some
realtors
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 contact
information
 and some of my friends
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 with them in past
whom
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and whom
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 you can trust on them. I
also
 send you my previous
owner
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 phone number so you can call him as well. There
are
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 some important
information
 I would like to share with you that you will get many agents during
this
 process but don’t trust
on
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them without any reference, the reason is that some of them are only cheating
the
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people. I had a classmate who have
bad
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experienced
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 with him. I hope
this
information
 will
fulfill
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 your needs. Best Regards, Jack
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