Some people like to try new new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion

Should I try? or Should I not?
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question mostly arises
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in
one
's life. Some
people
fond
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of giving shots to new and exciting
things
,
however
, some are so reserved
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their own era.
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essay will
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discuss
dicuss
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discuss
both kinds of personalities in detail and will provide evidence why
one
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to try new
things
. To initiate with,
people
who try new
things
out of their box are really smart and intellectual.
For example
person
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a person
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who
love
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to visit
on
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apply
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different places,
learn
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and learn
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a distinct culture of
multiplaces
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multiplexes
multi places
. some of them learn
number
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of languages, they have
better
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a better
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understanding of the folks who belong to that place.
People
who
tries
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new
things
have better communication skills and sharp minds.
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Moreover
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Moreover
, they learn to adapt
different
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to different
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cultures and become
better
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a better
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human
being
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beings
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.
However
,
people
who are comfortable doing their own
things
are quite reserved
personality
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personalities
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. They are
perfectionist
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perfectionists
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in their own thing. They see life
with
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from
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different
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a different
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perspective
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perspectives
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. Doing
same
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thing day by day affects the mental
stability's
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stabilitys
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of
person
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a person
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.
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, according to
one
article published in times news about
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coder, who is been coding
from
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ages
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age
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ended up being mentally unstable. To give your mind a break it
important
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is important
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to take off and try new
things
In conclusion, trying new
things
can give you make you more
smater
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smarter
and intelligent.
However
, sticking to only
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familiar
similar
fimilar
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familiar
things
can put you in danger. Rather than doing
one
thing
everyday
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its
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it's
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essential to break the chain and try new
things
in life. Because we live just once.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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