Some people think the best way to stay fit is to join the gym/health club, while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are different opinions about that these days, everyone leads a healthy lifestyle. Some people have made sports a hobby, while others engage in daily activities. Both these views can have their own benefits and drawbacks .Let's have a detailed discussion of both views.
To commence with the view on the former group, there are two reasons behind their position.
First
is that some individuals prefer to joining
health Wrong verb form
join
club
because of Fix the agreement mistake
clubs
good
equipment and trained professionals. Correct article usage
the good
Also
personal trainers are assigned to all. They believe that a Add a comma
,Also
will
trained instruction could help Correct your spelling
well
for
to build a good lifestyle. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, recently one of my friend
, Fix the agreement mistake
friends
who
wanted to join Correct pronoun usage
apply
fitness
club, Add an article
a fitness
for
to maintain Change preposition
apply
appearance
. Definitely, Correct pronoun usage
their appearance
his appearance
her appearance
others
arguments exist too, but the ones mentioned, I believe do stand out.
Theming to Correct pronoun usage
other
latter
group's point of view, they Correct article usage
the latter
also
have their own grounds to justify the position they hold, first
of all, at home we are always engaged in daily chores, also
daily exercise are
more effective in many ways. Change the verb form
is
Such
as workout jogging, also
running are
Correct your spelling
our
health
, Replace the word
healthy
regular
Correct word choice
and regular
this
natural
no specific time Add a missing verb
is natural
and
money Correct word choice
or
required
.Actually walking doctors advised Add a missing verb
is required
to walk
for more than 10000 steps daily. Change the verb form
walking
For instance
, I always do sports. Especially running. However
, these days im
busy with my study Correct your spelling
I'm
although
, I try to find Change preposition
out for
for
it. It helps me Change preposition
apply
appearance
and keeping trim. Change preposition
with appearance
The an
ability of other arguments Choose an article
The
are
undeniable, but mentioning them is not worthy.
In conclusion, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
although
the opinions of people regarding, serious health-conscious humans consider going to gym to keep helth
. Like other people, I am considered that certain daily activities can be good enough to Correct your spelling
healthy
health
keeping
out and apt.Change the verb
keep
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