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The best curriculum is not one based on a static body of knowledge, but one which teaches students to cope with change. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that the main purpose of schools prepares their students for their future lives and the improvement of countries.
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 some social members believe that school authorities are responsible to design a curriculum just based on
knowledge
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 and scientific content, in my point of view the better action is to prepare
pupils
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 to cope with challenges. On one hand, no one can deny the main aim of an academy is to enhance their
pupils
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'
knowledge
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 in different eras to become useful people in their countries or worldwide. It is so vital for each society's upbringing of knowledgeable people in
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 of courses. The
pupils
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 are a kind of wealth of each country and it is the government's duty to impose the right form of syllabuses for children's education to boost their
knowledge
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 and be more powerful in different scientific eras.
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, these nations find it so difficult to suffer from a lack of
knowledge
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.
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,
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 education is a decisive factor throughout history, it is so crucial to teach
pupils
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 key methods of problem-finding and solving, when they face challenges during their lives. It is undeniable that
life
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 speed is so fast and all of us are tangible to a great number of changes during our lifetime;
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, those become successful who can cope with these challenges efficiently.
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, teaching special skills to regard unpredictable events play a key role in individuals'
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. While children spent most of their time at school, to my mind, the best curriculum supports both aspects of
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 and other
life
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 skills. In conclusion, I personally believe that not only education but
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life
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 skills-like coping with unpredictable events or changes- are so important to impose in schools' curriculum.
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