the tables below give information about sales of fairtraide labelled bananas and coffee
The table charts show information about the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee
and bananas in UK
, Switzerland, Denmark, Correct article usage
the UK
Belgium
and Sweden
in the years 1999 and 2004.
Overall
, it is clear from the charts that UK
had the highest Correct article usage
the UK
amount
of sales
of both coffee
and banana in the year 2004. Another interesting point is that although
most countries had growth in their sales’
Change noun form
sales
rate
of coffee
and banana, Belgium
and Sweden
were the only countries where their trends observed a fall in the banana sector during the period.
As with the sales
related to coffee
, While
the sales
rate
in UK
rocketed from 1.5 Correct article usage
the UK
million
euros
in 1999 to 20 million
euros
in 2004,having the maximum amount
of sales
, there was a slow increase in the sales
in Sweden
and Denmark
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Denmark's
sales
rate
, from 0.8 and 1.8 million
euros
to 1 and 2 million
euros
respectively. A two-fold rise was experienced in the figure of Switzerland from 3 million
euros
to 6 million
euros
, whereas
Belgium
observed slow growth in their sales
from 1 to 1-7 million
euros
.
Looking at the banana’s sales
rate
next,
while
there was a drastic increase in the sales
rate
in UK
from 15 in 1995 to 47 in 2004, having the highest Correct article usage
the UK
amount
of sales
in both years among all countries, a marginal decrease was seen in the Belgium
and Sweden
trends, from 1.8 million
euros
to 1 and 0.9 million
euros
respectively.Having the lowest amount
of sales
in 1999, the trend related to Denmark experienced a gradual growth from 0.6 to 4 million
euros
in 2004. The rate
of sales
in Switzerland saw a moderate rise from 1 million
euros
in 1999 to 5.5 million
euros
in 2004.Submitted by saba.taraghi on
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