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nowadays, companies invest their money in various business sectors, do you agree or disagree?

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The bar chart compares the investments, by various organizations, in four business sectors. Overall,
Organization
B
 spends more money than other groups, especially
in
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 staff training and
doing
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research. Meanwhile, construction receives the most money from
organization
 A and machinery is invested
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the most by
Organization
 C. In regard to machinery,
Organization
 C allocates 1.3
billion
 euros, 0.3
billion
 higher than
Organization
 A. Meanwhile, the remaining companies invest between 0.8
billion
 and 0.9
billion
. Concerning building, the expenditure of
Organization
 A is slightly higher than that of
Organization
B
, at nearly 1.5
billion
 and 1.4
billion
, in sequence.
In contrast
, the other businesses expend a similar sum, at 1
billion
 each. Regarding in-house training, the highest investment belongs to
Organization
B
, at nearly 1,9
billion
. The
next
 highest figure is
Organization
 A, at 1,2
billion
. Meanwhile, the expenditure of the remaining companies is from 0.7
billion
 to 0.9
billion
. In terms of research,
Organization
B
 spends 1.6
billion
 euros to conduct research, closely followed by
Organization
 C, at roughly 1.3
billion
. The sequence continues with
Organization
 A, E, and D, at about 1.1
billion
, roughly 0.7
billion
 and 0.6
billion
, correspondingly.
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