Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that the past series prominent to pupils while others disagree and think as per the present situation of the world needs to be improved
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knowledge
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skills.
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and inscriptions
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a historical place
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, in the current situation of
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knowledge
about Science
and Technology
will give invaluable benefits to pupils who learn about Science
and Technology
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instance
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in
newspaper
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the newspaper
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite