You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the footbal club. Introduce Explain experience andand special skills when do you think you can start
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to you to request a part-time job opportunety
in your club.
I am a student Correct your spelling
opportunity
who
studying Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
the University of Toronto. My program is sports management systems. I like Change preposition
at
Add the particle
to play
play
football in my rest time with my friends. I often watch the match that your football team plays on TV. I like your group, especially the leader, Mike.
I learned lots of skills about Replace the word
playing
manage
sports systems, Replace the word
managing
such
as how to build a good relationship in a group, how to make a plan to reduce injury sporters
Change noun form
sporters'
sporter's
body
and how to refresh the sporters in Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
short
time. Two months ago, I was invited to Sams club to help their basketball players refresh. Add an article
a short
Therefore
, I think I have some experience to do
the job.
I will finish my grade 2 study Change the verb form
doing
in
Change preposition
apply
this
term, so during these days
I am preparing Add a comma
,days
my
exam. I think if you could give me an Change preposition
for my
opportunety
to try, I can start Correct your spelling
opportunity
in
Change preposition
apply
this
summer vacation.
Thank you for you
Correct pronoun usage
your
patient
to read my letter, and I hope I can receive your reply.
Replace the word
patience
Sincerly
,
KevinCorrect your spelling
Sincerely
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,