You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you think you could start

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student who is looking for a part-time job. I am writing

this

letter to you to apply

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opportunity

apportunity

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opportunity

that you could give me to work in your football

club

. I am studying

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the University of ABC and will graduate before July. My program is sports healthy systems.

This

program can resolve lots of problems that sporters have in

matchs

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matches

or daily

exericises

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exercises

exercise

. I have two

years

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experience and I think if I can work in your football

club

, I can help team members refresh themselves and keep

power

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their power

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. I like

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to play

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play

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football, I always watch the match that your team play with others. Your

club

is famous and very successful. I heard that the work environment is

also

very nice, and all the

club

employees are friendly and helpful.

Therefore

, I wish

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can become one employee of your group. As I

maintion

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mention

maintain

. I will finish my study before July

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so that I can start my job

from

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July. I am looking

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forward

foward

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forward

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apply

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can receive your

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response

responses

responce

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response

, if you need any

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information

infoormation

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information

please connect

with

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me. Thank you so much. Yours sincerely, Kevin

Submitted by kevin. B on Mon Nov 07 2022

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1Word repetition
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22Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

191 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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