You live in a room which you share with another student. You have some problems with your roommate. Write a letter to the accomodation officer of the college to change your room. In your letter: *mention the problems you are facing *say how these problems are affecting you *request for a new room

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to you to request a new
room
for my
next
term. I am a student who lives in your
room
, which is No. 333. I hope you can help me change my
room
. I am living in an apartment with another person. He always brings some people into the apartment and has parties; sometimes they make a loud noise. The noise bothered me because I am a student and am preparing for my exam during these weeks. Another thing that I cannot accept is that they often take away my items,
such
as my bottle, my backpack, my laptop, etc. I asked him not to bring people into my
room
, and not to touch my things. The situation has never changed.
Therefore
, I want to change to a new
room
next
term and prefer a single
room
,
although
the rental fee is higher than
this
one. I do not want somebody to bother me again. Thank you for your help. I am looking forward to your reply. If you need any information, please connect me. Yours faithfully, Kevin
Submitted by kevin. B on

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