You live in a room which you share with another student. You have some problems with your roommate. Write a letter to the accomodation officer of the college to change your room. In your letter: mention the problems you are facing say how these problems are affecting you *request for a new room

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to you to request a new

room

for my

term. I am a student who lives in your

room

, which is No. 333. I hope you can help me change my

room

. I am living in an apartment with another person. He always brings some people into the apartment and has parties; sometimes they make a loud noise. The noise bothered me because I am a student and am preparing for my exam during these weeks. Another thing that I cannot accept is that they often take away my items,

such

as my bottle, my backpack, my laptop, etc. I asked him not to bring people into my

room

, and not to touch my things. The situation has never changed.

Therefore

, I want to change to a new

room

term and prefer a single

room

although

the rental fee is higher than

this

one. I do not want somebody to bother me again. Thank you for your help. I am looking forward to your reply. If you need any information, please connect me. Yours faithfully, Kevin

Submitted by kevin. B on Mon Nov 07 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

185 words

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