Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are good at or find the most interesting. Discuss both sides and give more options.

Individuals are divided in their opinion regarding the context of the
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of adolescents to learn specific
subjects
of their interests or to gather knowledge about all the
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will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
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. Reasons for
such
expectations might come from the excessive
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trend of the present world where individuals are required to be
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in order to secure a good job.
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administrative body for which
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ranging from
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literatures
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, geography,
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to current affairs
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required to crack the exam.
Consequently
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the safe side of the competition. On the other side, there are people who
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young students should learn particular
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which they feel
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. According to them, a person can perform best when s/he is studying as per their personal interest
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of studying numerous
subjects
that they do not find worthwhile to study.
For instance
, someone interested in solving complex mathematical equations may find studying
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a waste of time while anyone interested in the
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of Bengali Novels may struggle to solve those problems from
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.
Consequently
, both of them will fail to get an overall good score and at the same time will not have enough time to nurture the subject they are fascinated with. To conclude,
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must say it is useful to have the
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of basic knowledge of everything but one can not master them all.
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which one can master and can serve
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their intelligence.
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