You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain how you were helped • State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to appreciate one of your staff working at your supermarket which is located at Laurence Road.
This
was the first
time when I visited your mart last
Saturday. I came there
to find some decorative Correct your spelling
here
items
and ready-to-eat snacks for my housing warming party that I am planning next
week. In addition
to these, I was also
looking for disposable cutlery of a very specific design and size. I got really confused to find out all these items
because your shop has more than twenty aisles.
On this
occasion, one of your sales executive
, Rahul Kumar, saw me panicking and immediately jumped in to help me out. He invested his time and stayed with me all Fix the agreement mistake
executives
this
while to help me find out all the items
. Moreover
, I needed a few items
in large quantities, and he quickly arranged the help to carry them.
Although
your store is very far from my residence, just because of this
experience, I would like to visit your mart very frequently. I am also
planning to share this
wonderful shopping experience on social media platforms so that you can get better outreach and more people can benefit from such
a good service.
I would like to thank you once again for such
a fabulous buying experience.
Yours faithfully,
Aman MalikSubmitted by amanmalik640 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite