You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: • Describe the situation • Explain how you were helped • State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to appreciate one of your staff working at your supermarket which is located at Laurence Road.
This
was the
first
time when I visited your mart
last
Saturday. I came
there
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to find some decorative
items
and ready-to-eat snacks for my housing warming party that I am planning
next
week.
In addition
to these, I was
also
looking for disposable cutlery of a very specific design and size. I got really confused to find out all these
items
because your shop has more than twenty aisles. On
this
occasion, one of your sales
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, Rahul Kumar, saw me panicking and immediately jumped in to help me out. He invested his time and stayed with me all
this
while to help me find out all the
items
.
Moreover
, I needed a few
items
in large quantities, and he quickly arranged the help to carry them.
Although
your store is very far from my residence, just because of
this
experience, I would like to visit your mart very frequently. I am
also
planning to share
this
wonderful shopping experience on social media platforms so that you can get better outreach and more people can benefit from
such
a good service. I would like to thank you once again for
such
a fabulous buying experience. Yours faithfully, Aman Malik
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