Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Some people believe that using fossil fuels

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cars is one of the main reasons for air pollution

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we should decrease petrol consumption in several ways including rising its cost.

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it can provide a better condition, I think the authorities must consider other factors in

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. In the following essay, my reasons will be mentioned and

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I will suggest other pivotal solutions.

To begin

with, there isn't any deniable fact that carbon emissions can cause several negative effects on our environment. It has

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air and water sources and many plant and animal species have been endangered as well particularly

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a few decades ago.

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, it's an indispensable duty of governments to make some strict laws to restrict the amount of fossil

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consumption as the main reason

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pollution.

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, they can increase the price of those or allocate

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amount of them for everyone in a month.

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the authorities should investigate

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other factors as well.

First

and foremost, they should educate people to recycle some house waste like paper and glass.

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, it should be recommended to walk or ride a bicycle to work and

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of study because it can affect our energy consumption positively and

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it might help solve the traffic congestion. In conclusion, if the governments want to tackle the traffic and weather issues, they should consider all aspects mentioned including educational programs for people and making laws to inhibit overconsumption.