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Since time immemorial, in certain drier parts of the world, fresh water has always been a scarce natural resource. However, in the present time, due to various reasons, scarcity of fresh water has become a global issue.

#time #drier #parts #world #water #resource #scarcity
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The diagram illustrates the average
band
 scores of
students
, barring
English speaking
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 individuals, across different cultures, who underwent the IELTS examination in 2010. Overall, the
students
 from Germany surpassed other candidates in the IELTS examination during the period, while that from Indonesia scored the lowest
band
.
Furthermore
,
students
 speaking Malay performed slightly better at reading than their counterparts. Regarding speaking and listening, candidates speaking German aced the speaking module, with an average
band
 of 6.90, while the
students
 speaking Malay scored the lowest, with an average
band
 of 6.60.
Furthermore
, the listening module experienced the same trend as the speaking module on average As for writing and reading,
Students
 from Malaysia outperformed all the
students
 in the writing section of the IELTS examination, scoring an average
band
 of 6.40. That said, the same
students
 scored the lowest
band
 in the writing section of the exam, obtaining a
band
 score of 6.0 on average.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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