Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main source in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative source of energy (wind and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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The given data reflects the transformation of the same place by two images in Moscow from
1980-s
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and nowadays. Looking from the overall perspective,
this
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Moscow spot has considerably changed in turns of infrastructural
buildings
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and types of
cars
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on the road.
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, it is seen that some backside
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stayed untouched.
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of all, nowadays, there are significantly more
cars
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on the road than in 1980.
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, only one car has been driving to the right 80-s, whereas the recent picture shows five
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moving right. The
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themselves have a big range of variety nowadays compared to the
cars
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in 1980.
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to differences on the road, constructures, in turn,
changed
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in numbers. In fact, in 1980 there were fewer
buildings
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than today. Front-line houses have changed their appearance: the roof colour is green nowadays but it was red in 1980. It is
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seen that background high
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remain the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fossil fuels
  • Renewable energy
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Economic benefits
  • Energy security
  • Energy dependency
  • Infrastructure investment
  • Intermittent nature
  • Sustainable development
  • Technological innovation
  • Renewable energy sector
  • Pollution reduction
  • Job creation
  • Energy diversification
  • Global energy market
  • Geopolitical tensions
  • Supply chain disruptions
  • Energy storage systems
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