Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

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Dear Ahmed, How are you doing? I hope everything is good. I am writing

this

letter in order to share with you my plans for my vacation

summer I am very excited to tell you that, I am travelling to Egypt.

Although

it is my

first

time visiting

this

city, I have made a scheme and I wish you will help me with

this

Firstly

, I am going to spend 6 days in Cairo and I have booked a reservation at the Hilton hotel after reading reviews about it, and I hope that I made the right decision. I know that Egypt has a lot of attractive places to visit, so I am going to visit the great three pyramids,

in addition

to the Egyptian museum which contained a lot of artefacts. after that, I have the intention to have 5 days at Luxor, in order to visit Abu Simbel Temple which has been built across the sea and maybe I will take mesmerizing photos to remind me of

this

wonderful building. To summarize, as you remember I prefer to experience new adventures,

accordingly

, I hope you will recommend to me fascinating landmarks to see,

also

I want to do new activities. It has been ages since we met each other, and I wish I can see you during my vacation. I am looking forward to hearing from you, Best regards, Reham

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7 paragraphs

233 words

9.00

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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

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