Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

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Dear Ahmed, How are you doing? I hope everything is good. I am writing

this

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letter in order to share with you my plans for my vacation

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summer I am very excited to tell you that, I am travelling to Egypt.

Although

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it is my

first

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time visiting

this

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city, I have made a scheme and I wish you will help me with

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Firstly

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, I am going to spend 6 days in Cairo and I have booked a reservation at the Hilton hotel after reading reviews about it, and I hope that I made the right decision. I know that Egypt has a lot of attractive places to visit, so I am going to visit the great three pyramids,

in addition

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to the Egyptian museum which contained a lot of artefacts. after that, I have the intention to have 5 days at Luxor, in order to visit Abu Simbel Temple which has been built across the sea and maybe I will take mesmerizing photos to remind me of

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wonderful building. To summarize, as you remember I prefer to experience new adventures,

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, I hope you will recommend to me fascinating landmarks to see,

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I want to do new activities. It has been ages since we met each other, and I wish I can see you during my vacation. I am looking forward to hearing from you, Best regards, Reham

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

233 words

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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: • explain your travel plans • describe the interesting places you plan to visit • ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, it is mandatory for school children to wear uniforms. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and will use up the world’s resources. Do you agree or disagree?

Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend, while others argue that it leads to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

You have arranged a meeting with a business partner. Unfortunately, you have to change the arrangement. Write a letter to your business partner. In your letter, apologize for the changes explain the reason why the changes were needed explain the new arrangement