Many teachers follow the practice of giving students task for home often based on lessons taught in class . It is often believed that such a practice should be stopped as it reduces time spend on leisure activities or nonacademic pursuits. Do you agree or disagree?

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them to review the studying journey. Some may think
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should
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from the
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to explore themselves with other activities.
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with the statement. I believe that it is still necessary to ask
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home work
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based on the
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teaching because of
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of studying and the
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fairness
of education.
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, finishing the task based on the course force student
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those basic
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knowledge
. With the questions from the books or course, it can drive
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time to read or understand
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knowledge
.
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tell
students
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knowledge
in the
class
instead
go outside , after all not all fields of
knowledge
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experience. When it comes to
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more contracted or complicated
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, teachers
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to teach
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leisure activities or
nonacdemic
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nonacademic
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learning
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for people who are in
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poor material living.
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it
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a huge
cost
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experiential
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experience
learning
such
as studying abroad to learn
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language or experience
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culture. Once
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put
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home work
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, relying
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cost
, it will
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the poor
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pressure
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and obviously not fair for them. They probably do not have money to sustain their living
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having the
cost
just for “
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.” In brief, when we take the
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quality and
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issue in the education field, it
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to ask
students
finish
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their homework to pave the solid foundation for
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further
advancement
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study
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and
also
avoid the inequality situation
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in our educational system, which should secure the
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fairness
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opportunity
for all the
students
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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