Many teachers follow the practice of giving students task for home often based on lessons taught in class . It is often believed that such a practice should be stopped as it reduces time spend on leisure activities or nonacademic pursuits. Do you agree or disagree?

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works is
the
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crucial for the
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, which
help
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helps

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them to review the studying journey. Some may think
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a student
the student

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student
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students

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should
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reduce
reduse
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reduce

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having too much
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homework
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home work
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homework

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from the
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in
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order
oder
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order

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to explore themselves with other activities.
However
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, to me, I
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disagree
disagreed
disagee
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with the statement. I believe that it is still necessary to ask
students
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to have
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homework
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home work
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homework

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based on the
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teaching because of
quality
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the quality

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of studying and the
fareness
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fairness

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of education.
Firstly
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, finishing the task based on the course force student
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assimilate
assmilate
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to assmilate

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those basic
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that basic knowledge

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knowledge
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. With the questions from the books or course, it can drive
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student
students
stdent
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students

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take
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to take

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time to read or understand
those
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that knowledge

It appears that the plural demonstrative those is modifying the singular noun knowledge. Consider using a singular demonstrative or a plural noun instead.

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knowledge
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.
For example
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, it will be better to directly
to
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apply

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tell
students
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about the
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space-related
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space related
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space-related

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knowledge
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in the
class
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instead
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go outside , after all not all fields of
knowledge
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can have the experimental
class
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,which can personally
to
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apply

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experience. When it comes to
teach
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teaching

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more contracted or complicated
issue
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issues

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, teachers
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teaching
teahing
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teaching

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in
class
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and homework in
corse
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course

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are more solid.
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Besides
Besieds
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Besides

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, asking
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the teacher
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teacher
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teachers

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to teach
students
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based on
the
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apply

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leisure activities or
nonacdemic
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nonacademic
non-academic

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learning
is not fare
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is not fared
is not faring

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for people who are in
the
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apply

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poor material living.
Sometime
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Sometimes

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it
take
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takes

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a huge
cost
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for some
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experiential
experiencial
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experience

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learning
such
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as studying abroad to learn
foreign
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a foreign

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language or experience
exotic
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the exotic

The noun phrase exotic culture seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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culture. Once
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the teache
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teacher
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teacher

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teacher

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teache
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teacher

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put
this
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kind of
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homework
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home work
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homework

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, relying
highly
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onhighly
uponhighly

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cost
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, it will
gives
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give

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the poor
great
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under great

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pressure
presure
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pressure

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and obviously not fair for them. They probably do not have money to sustain their living
cost
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not even
mention
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to mention

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having the
cost
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just for “
experiencial
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experiential

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leaning
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learning

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.” In brief, when we take the
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learning
learnig
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learning

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quality and
fareness
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fairness

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issue in the education field, it
is still need
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still needs

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to ask
students
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finish
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to finish

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their homework to pave the solid foundation for
the
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apply

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further
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advancement
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advanced

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study
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of study

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and
also
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avoid the inequality situation
happen
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happening

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in our educational system, which should secure the
fareness
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fairness

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oppornity
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opportunity

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for all the
students
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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