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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #job #money #salary #life
The decision on which
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career
carrier
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 path to follow is somehow vital in a person's
life
. Many consider job offering
high
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 salary will guarantee a more fulfilling
life
. Others believe that joy and working satisfaction is the key factors
of
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in
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 choosing an occupation. It is undoubtful that big money rewards from well-paid job help us to have a better
life
 quality.
For instance
, families with high incomes are eligible
to
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for
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 better health care services or they can just use the wage to buy themselves
convenience
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such
 as smart home appliances or hiring
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a housemaid
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housemaid
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. I believe
life
 may not be happier for those but it will definitely be easier. Even when they are not satisfied with their profession, they can use the payment to fill their moments apart from task time with exciting things
such
 as a luxury vacation or buying high-end belongings.
However
, money is not the right motivation for a person to get over obstacles and achieve
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 goals. My friend who just left his million-dollar manager position to start working as a freelancer said that he lacked the feeling of achievement in the tasks he does every day and was fed up with the heavy workloads. It can be said that having an occupation that you enjoy will provide
stress
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 and worry-free
life
 where
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 obstacles are just another exciting challenge. As far as I am concerned, it may be impossible to find an enjoyable stint that offers a high salary so one should know what to exchange and understand the consequences
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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