In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using mobile phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?
These days it is being observed that in upcoming years individuals won't able to pay for their things in shops in cash. All payments will be done by Electronic cards or mobile phone applications. In my point of view, I believe
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few years is developing technology and its rapid update daily. As I know all individuals are working flat out these days and tend to speed up their daily tasks as much as faster than before to save more time for their personal life and their family, so they prefer to shop online and pay by phone Linking Words
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of waiting for their cash return.
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, companies are competing with one another in developing their technology. Linking Words
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unhappiness can be manageable by governments and companies by designing apps that can classify their money the same as what they were doing before and teach them how to work with it. In conclusion, to reiterate, Linking Words
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one day the payment would be done electronically, the applications can be designed for society who are unhappy about Linking Words
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development to manage their budgeting the same as the previous time acceptable to me. I believe if Linking Words
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