A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that a big wage is more crucial that
the
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job
pleasure.
This
essay totally disagrees with that statement. I believe that
people
who spend most of their
life
,
everyday
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at work, understand what they spend it on and are feeling pleasure and not negativity,
also
they think that
money
doesn'
t
exactly bring happiness. Employees understand that the
job
could take them 30% of their
life
and with
this
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on their
mind
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they try to find
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opportunities to enjoy every bit of it. Imagine 30% of our
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lives
life
life's
lifes
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being full of negativity, is
this
life
even worth living?
For example
, my uncle Andrew was only working for his big salary, not thinking about his mental health, which
finally
resulted in a mental breakdown and
job
loss. Now he regrets badly that he got driven by
money
. It doesn'
t
matter, how much
money
anyone had, it still won'
t
buy happiness .
Although
many
people
say
otherwise
, in
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reality
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money
just
kill
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every happy aspect of your
life
. Yes, it can buy
people
many things like cars, girls,
houses
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and can work as a
relax
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factor,
however
it won'
t
make you enjoy
life
.I was a victim of
this
idea, and till now
i
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still regret everything
i
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did. I thought that
money
can rule the world and can acquire you anything you would ever want
,
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until reality didn'
t
hit. In conclusion, for a big percentage of
people
, earning a really good wage is less important than
job
satisfaction, because they fully realize that their whole
life
so
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they have to enjoy it and that
money
doesn'
t
buy happiness
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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