A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that a big wage is more crucial that
the
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job
pleasure. This
essay totally disagrees with that statement. I believe that people
who spend most of their life
, everyday
at work, understand what they spend it on and are feeling pleasure and not negativity, Replace the word
every day
also
they think that money
doesn't
exactly bring happiness.
Employees understand that the job
could take them 30% of their life
and with this
on their Add a comma
,this
mind
they try to find Add a comma
,mind
the
opportunities to enjoy every bit of it. Imagine 30% of our Correct article usage
apply
Correct your spelling
lives
life
life's
lifes
being full of negativity, is Correct your spelling
lives
this
life
even worth living? For example
, my uncle Andrew was only working for his big salary, not thinking about his mental health, which finally
resulted in a mental breakdown and job
loss. Now he regrets badly that he got driven by money
.
It doesn't
matter, how much money
anyone had, it still won't
buy happiness . Although
many people
say otherwise
, in Add the comma(s)
,reality
reality
Replace the word
real
money
just kill
every happy aspect of your Correct subject-verb agreement
kills
life
. Yes, it can buy people
many things like cars, girls, houses
and can work as a Correct word choice
and houses
relax
factor, Change the form of the verb
relaxing
however
it won't
make you enjoy life
.I was a victim of this
idea, and till now i
still regret everything Change the capitalization
I
i
did. I thought that Change the capitalization
I
money
can rule the world and can acquire you anything you would ever want,
until reality didn'Remove the comma
apply
t
hit.
In conclusion, for a big percentage of people
, earning a really good wage is less important than job
satisfaction, because they fully realize that their whole life
so
they have to enjoy it and that Correct word choice
apply
money
doesn't
buy happinessSubmitted by caramaniulian15 on
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