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he diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

he diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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This
 is
figure
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a figure
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 of
wave-energy
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the wave-energy
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machine
despict
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depict
despite
 the
componants
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components
 of the
machine
 and how it is work. It is clear from the second picture the importance of the installation
lcation
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location
 of the instrument.
According to
 what is shown, the wave-energy
machine
compose
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 of
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an electrcity
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electrcity
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electricity
genertore
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generator
generators
, two
tubrines
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turbines
 and two chambers. The waves will
moves
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 the air around the turbines through the chambers which will generate energy. the second
drwiang
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drawing
illustrute
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illustrate
 the
postive
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positive
 and negative
side
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sides
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 of each
loaction
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location
options
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option
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. If the wave energy device
installed
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is installed
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on
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in
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shallow
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a shallow
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 water area the installation costs will be low but the disadvantage will be smaller waves and lower output.
in
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 the
oppist
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opposite
side
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 if the wave-energy instrument
located
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 in deep water, there will be larger waves which produce higher output.
to sum up
, we could say that wave energy
machine
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machines
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 are simple & could be
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cost-effective
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cost effective
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cost-effective
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 based on
there
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their
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 installation locations
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words machine with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 5 times.
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