he diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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This

figure

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a figure

the figure

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wave-energy

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the wave-energy

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machine

despict

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depict

despite

the

componants

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components

of the

machine

and how it is work. It is clear from the second picture the importance of the installation

lcation

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location

of the instrument.

According to

what is shown, the wave-energy

machine

compose

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an electrcity

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electrcity

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electricity

genertore

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generator

generators

, two

tubrines

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turbines

and two chambers. The waves will

moves

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the air around the turbines through the chambers which will generate energy. the second

drwiang

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drawing

illustrute

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illustrate

the

postive

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positive

and negative

side

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sides

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of each

loaction

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location

options

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option

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. If the wave energy device

installed

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is installed

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shallow

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a shallow

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water area the installation costs will be low but the disadvantage will be smaller waves and lower output.

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the

oppist

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opposite

side

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if the wave-energy instrument

located

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in deep water, there will be larger waves which produce higher output.

to sum up

, we could say that wave energy

machine

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machines

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are simple & could be

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cost-effective

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cost effective

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cost-effective

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based on

there

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their

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installation locations

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
28Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

148 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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he diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary households. What problems are caused by household waste, and what solutions may be possible in both the short and the long term?

It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and families. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+