Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

If we perform fun activities with a kid, it will be more beneficial in
development
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of his skills and creativity rather than simply reading. I completely agree with
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given statement. Children tend to enjoy interactive games and tasks more as compared to reading from books
hence
they will put
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effort which benefits them in their development.
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, with
such
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they will learn how to behave and work together as a team which in return benefits them in different areas in future. When a pupil is introduced to lots of colours and objects, it attracts them more and they automatically participate with all willingness which is not the case in reading as they have to develop the habit and sit at a place for
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which can be hard for them as well as for their trainer. According to some studies, if we teach a child through fun methods
then
he/she will retain that information for
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period as compared to grasping it directly from books,
for
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if we introduce colours with the help of different objects and shapes
then
a learner will show more interest in learning and understand things clearly rather than reading it out through books.
Moreover
, with
this
method, a child is learning colours as well as shapes which enhance his creativity and prove to be better in upgrading his skill set. Having a habit of reading is
also
important as later in life it will help them to have
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vocabulary, grammar and sentence formation but it can be a boring method for a kid to learn especially at a very young stage. While if we teach the same thing through fun activities
then
they will not only enjoy and learn it better but
also
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know how to behave and be a part of a team which is an important skill to have in life.
This
will benefit them in making friends in school, participating in group projects in college and
also
doing assignments together at the workplace which simple reading cannot teach. A child must have all the skills including reading but for his better
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it is necessary to teach them in a way they understand
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properly and retain it to the maximum which helps them to enhance their creativity and polish their skills right from the start.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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