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Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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As the world is developing into a new era more and more
people
 are focused on doing their
activities
 alone,
,
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 team
activities
 teach
people
 life important
skills
 rather than doing
activities
 by themselves. I solely disagree with the aforementioned sentence and I will outline the reasons behind my disagreement with examples.
To begin
 with, solitary
activities
 help
people
 to improve their concentration in a comprehensive way,
this
 is because doing these
activities
 help them to do their
activities
 alone and there is no one to guide them, due to these circumstances
people
 need to use their own willpower in solo
activities
 and they could focus more on the task for a longer period. To define, the ability to concentrate well allows a person to acquire new knowledge and
therefore
 it increases their competitiveness. To exemplify,
people
 who do youtube videos alone,
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 them to achieve their goals by developing their mistakes. So solo
activities
 can be more valuable than the
skills
 they can develop in group
activities
.
Secondly
, humans who take part in single
activities
 can become better problem solvers,
this
 is because when they face challenges, they have to deal by themselves
instead
 of learning or getting from others.
For example
,
people
 who are travelling alone to a foreign country tend to become more resourceful and faster learners because they have the ability to tackle problems independently.
Besides
, it is crucial to learn life
skills
 alone rather than relying on a team. To sum up, I believe solitary
activities
 teach humans more
skills
 than group because they allow
people
 to improve their concentration as well as problem-solving
skills
.
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