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Excessive sugar consumption causes many diseases. Some people think that it is the government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption while others think that it is the individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views

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The illustrations demonstrate the life cycle of
Salmon
 which is a species of large fish. In general, their life initiates from an egg in an upper
river
 to a mature one after about 9 years in three different types of water resources. In the beginning, a fertilized
salmon
 lays eggs among small stones covered by reeds in a streambed of the upper
river
 with slow-moving water. Eggs are hatched and after about 5 to 6 months newborns fish with a length of 3-8 cm which is called Fry are ready to move to the lower
river
. The Fry inhabit the lower
river
 with fast flowing approximately four years to become Smolt with a size of 12-15 cm from the head to the tail. Smolts
then
, migrate to the open sea to be matured.
This
 period lasts for five years, and in
this
 ,stage the length of an adult
salmon
 is 70-76 cm. A fertilized adult
salmon
 again moves up towards the
river
 to reach the upper
river
 where eggs can be accommodated by slow-moving water to complete their life cycle.
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