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The illustration demonstrates the proportion of Australian genders in distinct ages group with physical
activity
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 in 2010. In general, unlike the group aged 15 to 24, in all other groups females had regular exercise more than men up until the
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 of 65 when they have almost similar
activity
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. Regarding males, people in the
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 group of 15 to 24 had more
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 than other groups by 52.8 per cent. When men were getting older, they experienced a slight decline in physical
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 to the
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 of 35 – 44 by the percentage of 39.5.
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, the trend gradually grew to the
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 of over 65 and more with a proportion of 46.7.
On the other hand
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, the female trend is totally different. By raising their
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, women had more exercise from 47.7 to almost over half in the
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 of 55 to 64. And,
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 the physical
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 of women decline to 46.7 per cent. At the
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 of 65 and more, almost 47 per cent of both genders had exercised in that year.
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