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The illustration demonstrates the proportion of Australian genders in distinct ages group with physical
activity
in 2010. In general, unlike the group aged 15 to 24, in all other groups females had regular exercise more than men up until the
age
of 65 when they have almost similar
activity
. Regarding males, people in the
age
group of 15 to 24 had more
activity
than other groups by 52.8 per cent. When men were getting older, they experienced a slight decline in physical
activity
to the
age
of 35 – 44 by the percentage of 39.5.
Then
, the trend gradually grew to the
age
of over 65 and more with a proportion of 46.7.
On the other hand
, the female trend is totally different. By raising their
age
, women had more exercise from 47.7 to almost over half in the
age
of 55 to 64. And,
then
the physical
activity
of women decline to 46.7 per cent. At the
age
of 65 and more, almost 47 per cent of both genders had exercised in that year.
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