In many countries, people have wider variety of food than can be grown in their local area.as a result, then much of the food people eat today has to come from other regions. Do you think that advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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It can be seen in a lot of countries, individuals have different options for eatables than what they can farm in their living places. And
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of meals from outside of their surroundings. I firmly believe that
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aspect has both advantages and disadvantages,and I will show my ideas through the below writings In
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