You have heard that the local authority is planning to build a shopping mall in the centre of your town. You do not agree with this decision because there are already a lot of shops. Write a letter to the planning department. In your letter -say why you are writing -give reasons for your objections -explain what you think would be a better alternative

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Dear Sir, I am Ozan Akbulut, I am one of the citizens of the

town

. I am writing about which is planning to build a shopping mall in the centre of our

town

. As a family, we are worried about

this

. Because, already our

town

has a lot of shops but

on the other hand

, there are very few playgrounds for children. That's why

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we think that our

town

doesn't need another marketing place.

Moreover

, our

town

's population is not high,

therefore

we believe that our

town

needs playgrounds more than a shopping centre. I have been living in

this

town

for twenty years.

Therefore

, I want to give some suggestions to you which are related to children's happiness. If you build a mall outside the

town

centre it would be better. I know

that is

important to provide a job for people. Many people can benefit from

this

mall. Absolutely we support you about build a marketing place outside of the

town

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

163 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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