You have heard that the local authority is planning to build a shopping mall in the centre of your town. You do not agree with this decision because there are already a lot of shops. Write a letter to the planning department. In your letter -say why you are writing -give reasons for your objections -explain what you think would be a better alternative

Dear Sir, I am Ozan Akbulut, I am one of the citizens of the

town

. I am writing about which is planning to build a shopping mall in the centre of our

town

. As a family, we are worried about

this

. Because, already our

town

has a lot of shops but

on the other hand

, there are very few playgrounds for children. That's why

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

we think that our

town

doesn't need another marketing place.

Moreover

, our

town

's population is not high,

therefore

we believe that our

town

needs playgrounds more than a shopping centre. I have been living in

this

town

for twenty years.

Therefore

, I want to give some suggestions to you which are related to children's happiness. If you build a mall outside the

town

centre it would be better. I know

that is

important to provide a job for people. Many people can benefit from

this

mall. Absolutely we support you about build a marketing place outside of the

town

.