Some people say history is one of the most important school subject. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

This
graph has projected the total population of China and India in the past and present and the upcoming future between the years 2000 till 2050. Overall, the graph shows a gradual increase in both cities. Over the following years, the Indian population’s number starts from 1250, while the
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population was less than 1,000
billion
in 2000.
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, both increased gradually to reach close in humIndianbers in the present time 2022 for 1410 and 1400
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respectively. In the future, in the near
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both will have the same number of people about 1420 bill n the year 2030. After that, the Indian people, actions will keep increasing toll reaching 1600
billion
human beings in the year 2050. While the Chinese population number will diminish slightly reaching 1390
billion
by the end of 2050.
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