Does the educational success of a student depend on the teacher or the attitude. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Some people agree that educational success is all from the
students
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students'
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doing. Others think that it is all influenced by their
teacher
. I personally hold the view that both have weight in
this
equation. There are several reasons why I feel
this
way, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin
with, there is nothing a
teacher
can do if the
student
does not put in some work. Even with an amazing
teacher
, the
student
needs to go and study. My personal experience is a compelling example of
this
. I had amazing professors in college, they made every subject easier in the way they taught. But, after the classes I needed to go to the library and
stay
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hours studying,
otherwise
, I would fail. One time I had a lecturer
that
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made things seem so easy that I thought I did not need to study. As a result, I had a really low score on my midterms,
in contrast
, when I put in the work for the final exam I received the highest mark.
Furthermore
, there is a limit on what the
student
can do alone, and the
teacher
needs to give guidance to point the right direction for the pupil.
For example
, when I was writing my thesis my advisor would disappear for weeks and when we spoke he did not give me any direction if my research made sense or what should I search for to make it better.
Consequently
, I spent hours reading academic papers, looking for better motivation,
instead
of focussing on programming and data cleaning. One day he asked if I could change advisors because he did not have enough time to help me. My new advisor was really patient and pointed me to what would be better for my research and in the end, we published my thesis. In conclusion, I strongly agree with both points of view. The
teacher
needs to give the tools to the
student
, but the
student
also
needs to be willing to work with those tools given.
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