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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give details of the course you took at the university comp science explain why you recommend the university best faculty and placement give some advice about how to apply online portal

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I hope, you’re doing well today. I’m writing you
this
 letter to explain that you wanted to
apply
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 the same
course
 at the same
university
. The
course
 will help your career in the future, you can be sure of that. I took
this
course
last
 term from Mr Brown who was
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my
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superior ,
however
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this
 lesson’s teacher was changed to Mr Green
Therefore
, it is taken only on Mondays at 9 o’clock.
In addition
, you can purchase the Law of Thermodynamics book for the lesson. Most information will be taught by
this
 book during the term. If you take
this
course
 at
this
university
,
this
 situation will be better for you. Because there are many facilities which you can use freely.
For example
, if you want, you can study at the library which has
single
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 room 24/7.
Moreover
, in the afternoon lunch is given to students freely. Applying for
this
course
 is effortless because you don’t have to go the
university
. Enter the
university
 site, and there is a form under the banner.
Then
 you must fill out the form. After
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application, a mail will be sent from the
university
. I hope you’ll be successful, and I believe that you’ll have a good time there. Kind Regards, Mehmet
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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