There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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and the educational system, are avid to

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education, since it is the essential factor for their future life. There is a widespread opinion that non-academic subjects should not be taught at school and it's claimed that it would increase

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unacademic skills are important and useful for

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a great problem with concentration,

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unacademic activities can represent a distraction from their studying. The study concluded in America, shown that it is much better for

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not to be interrupted from their studying

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hard for them to continue their job.

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only with homework without break between it is harmful

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their unstable mental health.

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: my brother had swimming and football lessons at school, and that's the reason he always goes to college with a happy face and never becomes tired of the routine.

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, Cooking and swimming is the great way to facilitate anxiety and decrease stress

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should be encouraged to stay fit and healthy, via

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activities since obesity is the 21st century's main problem.

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, physical education represents the same importance as much as math or English. In conclusion, while unacademic subjects may be a distraction for

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, it is essential to remain

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activities at schools, because it is a way

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and increase their productivity.