In many places women are taking jobs, which are traditionally done by men. What do you think make these changes happen? What’s your opinion about it?
Nowadays, more and more
women
are working in plants, firms and industrial sites where only men
are used to be employed. Women
are now more ambiguous and competing with men
. This
essay will explore reasons why women
are taking places occupied by men
and at the end of the essay will underline my opinion.
Firstly
, the reason is that there are so many single women
pursuing their careers instead
of building families. This
could create competitive women
who are eager for career development instead
of building healthy relationships.For instance
, compared to married women
single one will wish for high-paid jobs and career opportunities because the only passion of not married women
is their job opportunities.Thus
that is
why men
are being replaced by females in job places.
Secondly
, there are so many lonely mothers who give upbringing to their offspring. Consequently
, they need more prospective job positions with high salaries since not everything is affordable nowadays because of high-cost products.For example
, in order to afford a good education and food supply for their kids' parents should earn more money. Thus
, women
are taking any positions even men
needed positions because it gives them the opportunity for earning high wages.
To conclude, it is true that women
are taking men
's traditional workplaces. In our contemporary community , the world it is common that women
and men
are on the same level. In my opinion, women
should know their limitations and never compete with men
because men
are considered to be the chief of the family. Otherwise
, females will stay lonely and not be respected by men
.Submitted by zhadym on
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