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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to a missed
flight
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 an unforeseen issue at the airport on the 13th of July.
The
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Flight
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flight
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 075464 was scheduled to leave at 6:00pm,
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, I was at the airport right on time to board the
flight
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.
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, an announcement was made that the
flight
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 has been delayed for three hours.
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, it was time to board the
flight
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, when it got to my turn for ticket assessment, I was told that I need a connecting
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 ticket.
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, prior to the day of travel, I put a call to
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customer service to find out if I will be needing the
now requested
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 document, I was assured I could fly without them. Because of
this
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 situation, I was unable to attend an important Job seminal.
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, I missed a not refundable connecting
flight
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 to
Dubia
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Dubai
. Since I could not get a
flight
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 back to Abuja that day, I had to book a hotel.
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, incurring unplanned expenses.
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,
it
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 would like an all-expense paid
flight
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 back to Abuja and
refund
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a refund
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 for the missed
flight
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 as compensation. Do contact me on 08141874649 if you need more details. I await
you
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 earliest response, Yours sincerely, Desire Godwin.
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