You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
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letter to let you know about my experience when I stayed in your hotel for 15 days from (10-02-2022 to 17-02-2022) during my business trip to Banglore from Hyderabad. The best thing that I liked is the location of the hotel which is exactly in the
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of the city. which helps the guests to explore the city without any hassles and
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good public transport facility. The other point that I loved most is the complimentary breakfast, which has a variety of cousins where I tried everything as I was not fond of trying different items outside but when it comes to your hotel I tried Italian as well as north Indian cousins that
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liked most compared to any other cousins. From my experience, you should improve some of the services like swimming pool maintenance and housekeeping. when I went to the swimming pool area in the evening to swim but after seeing the swimming pool condition I came back to the room as it was not cleaned properly. when it comes to housekeeping service, have tried to order water bottles at midnight but nobody was answering the call I felt
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is where you guys need improvement. Hoping to visit again for my
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business trip. Yours faithfully, Varra Maruthi Reddy
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