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Band 3.5

You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - describe the training course you want to do – explain what the company could do to help you – say how the course will be useful for your job

#work #company #advertisement #course #job #manager
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Dear
Mr.
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John I'm writing you
this
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 letter regarding an advertisement for a training
course
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 , I saw
earlier
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it earlier
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 on Youtube.Since we work in a high-end international company. To clarify,
its
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 a digital marketing
course
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 that covers the latest digital marketing tools used in social media including Facebook,Instagram,Twitter and Google ads.The
course
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 is online with
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 duration of 30 hours.Plus,they will provide as well one free premium month subscription to
Scout.com
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the Scout.com
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 tool ,the newest running ads tool which we really need in running monthly campaigns.
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, I request your approval if the department is willing to pay 50% of the
course
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 ,
that
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which
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 will be
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approximately
approxemetly
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approximately
 $150 from
total
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 charges
$
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of $
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300.
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, I believe
this
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course
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 will add
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a lot
alot
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a lot
 to my job in managing our social media account .
In addition
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 , I will be able to convey my experience from
this
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 class to my
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colleagues
collegues
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colleagues
 in the department.
Sincerly
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Sincerely
 Yours,
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • training course
  • skillset enhancement
  • educational leave
  • sponsorship
  • reimbursement
  • knowledge integration
  • work efficiency
  • career progression
  • continuing education
  • team contribution
  • productivity boost
  • expertise building
  • industry standards
  • hands-on experience
  • networking opportunities
  • cutting-edge techniques
  • best practices
  • return on investment
  • in-house training
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