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In most successful companies, some people think that communication between employers and workers is the most important factor. Other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, it is argued that
one
 of the main
factors
 in a progressive company is
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engagement between employers and
employees
.
However
, some would not agree and suggest other ideas
how
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 to encourage workers.
This
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factors
 that have an influence on people during work and evaluate
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 importance of
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. Personally, I would support the idea that there are many
factors
 that should be encountered. On the
one
 hand, feedback on
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 performance is a significant part of a working environment.
Firstly
, it enables workers to estimate their task completion rate and correct mistakes if
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 were made. As well as
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praise for a successful task achievement would encourage principal staff for
further
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creation of an acceptable work environment,
this
 factor should not be neglected. While,
on the other hand
, there are a lot more features that
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 an impact on
employees
.
For instance
,
one
 of them would be a team spirit, which enhances the working spirit. Promotion prospects
also
 play
one
 of
the
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crucial roles in boosting workers to perform well. As in
this
 case, healthy competition and a chance for personal development would encourage ones
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 successful
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 achievement. In conclusion, even though,
interaction
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 between employers and
employees
 is an essential part of a working experience, it is important to consider other
factors
 that have an impact. Other points
such
 as
a
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team spirit and promotion prospects should stand by any company. In complex, it would create a perfect environment for everyone's development.
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