In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise tha their products are new in some ways. Why is this?Do you think it is a positive and negative development?

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many organizations and
companies
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always
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always
in their
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marketing
for their
products
are shown that the
products
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brand.
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why
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the advertisements
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behind
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behind
this
strategy, they are trying to
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attract
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attract
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customers by saying
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words.
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Because
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for the people is that
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they are looking for the new one.
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someone
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old
products
,
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nobody
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will be attracted to the old things, just
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may be
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few
of people. So by saying always and stating in the advertisements the new
products
will
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in customers minds. The
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,
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the
companies
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their
products
as
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products
that will help them to stay for long Time in the market. For
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while the
companies
have the ability to offer
the
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new
products
in the markets, that
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they are still strong in the markets and they can stay and compete
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competitors. On the other
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, advertising the
products
as new could
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the integrity of the business, if the
products
could not approve
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. And if the
companies
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such
as certificates
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approved
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the relevant authorities.
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,
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advertising is very important for
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companies
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their
products
and there are
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saying or stating incorrect information about the
products
.
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