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The below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The bar chart illustrates the rate of
products
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 from different aspects exported by a country in a couple of years. While the table represents the percentage variation between the two years in each field. It is clear that the exports of gems and jewellery were the only category which decreased in 2016. Whereas, all the other categories showed increments with variant percentages. Petroleum
products
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 captured the highest value in both years. Looking at the figure in more detail, We can see that textiles witnessed the largest increase by about 15.24%,
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, the agricultural
products
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 showed the least increasement percentage by only 0.81% throughout the same period to stay at slightly the same value. Moving on to engineered goods which jumped by a fairly good percentage to be slightly above 60$ billion in 2016 which is approximately double the exports of agricultural
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 exports which is just around 30$ billion.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • trend analysis
  • anomalies
  • percentage change
  • sector analysis
  • global demand
  • domestic production
  • economic conditions
  • technological advancements
  • international regulations
  • economic growth
  • trade relations
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