Inviting a friend You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter: explain the reason for the party give the date and time of the party suggest what the classmate could bring to the party

Dear Mark I hope you are doing well,
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writing to invite you to the surprise birthday
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our classmate Anwar. I don't know if you noticed that, but Anwar wasn't feeling well lately, and whenever
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asked him about it, he always refuses to answer or changes the subject immediately, which made me suspicious, so
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messaged his brother Amine on
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, and he told me that Anwar hasn't visited his family since two years, he was missing his family and homesick, that why
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decided to organize a surprise birthday
party
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it will cheer him a bit. The birthday
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take place
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take place
on
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1st, at the campus hall, and it will start at 17h, right after our
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for the day, it's a surprise
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, so we really have to pretend that nothing's going to happen. To make
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happen everyone has to take part, Shanon is in charge of decorating the hall, Tony will bring food and beverage while
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take care of reserving the campus hall for the event,
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be really
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grateful
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if you can bring flags of all the countries that students are from, an please get them as soon as possible to Shanon for the decoration. Looking forward to hearing from you. All the best Youcef
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