In many places, people's lifestyle is changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of those developments outweigh the disadvantages?

The ideal lifestyle is a rational blend of work and family life. In the current ,scenario people's way of living has transformed very fast and is more focused on other aspects of living than family relationships . Personally, I support a positive standard of life

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of one area dominating another which will be discussed in the undermentioned paragraphs. In the

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