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You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight Explain how missing your flight impacted you Clearly state what you would like the airline to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#flight #airport #airline #addresses #sir #madam
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Afo. I am writing
this
 letter to raise my concerns
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regarding
reagrding
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regarding
 my
flight
 booking on 18th
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November
novemeber
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november
 2022 by KLM Airlines. For your reference, my
flight
 number is KLM123 starting from India to
final
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my final
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 destination
at
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in
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 Germany. I would like to bring you
notice
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 about the situation which lead me to miss my
flight
 to Germany which was very much important.
Firstly
, your airline staff were not sufficient enough to handle all the passengers on the time.
Moreover
, being
weekend
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the weekend
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 the queue was very long for
checkin
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check in
check-in
 and baggage drop off.
Secondly
, being your premium customer I have
option
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 to get faster services at any airport for your
flight
 journey.
However
, Your customer service executive was
also
 not helpful in terms of
this
 matter when spoke to them at your helpdesk, even though
i
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I
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 had completed my web
checkin
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check in
check-in
 prior and had only hand baggage along with me to carry. Since it was
business
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a business
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 trip and I have
meeting
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a meeting
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 with Delegates with regard to my business. It will be going to impact
on
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apply
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my professional career, and
also
 business loss.
Although
,
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apply
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 I
have
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missed my
flight
, I would request you to arrange
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for me
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me
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apply
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any
next
 available
flight
 so
i
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I
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 can commence my meetings on time. Hope you understand my situation and do
best
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your best
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 to resolve my
concernment
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. Thanking You
Afo
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