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Directors of organizations receive higher salaries than the ordinary worker. Some people think it is necessary while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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It is obvious that in contemporary society people who possess higher positions in a company get more desirable payment. Some people think it is acceptable while others think
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 condition is not fair for normal employers. Both given sides will be discussed in
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 essay, and in my opinion,
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 it still has some positive aspects, unequal wages are harmful to the organization in the long run.
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 with, paying higher salaries to high-level workers may lead to a more productive working environment. Money could be a strong incentive for most employees,
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 for better material conditions, they may work harder to achieve the goal of the corporation, in order to be promoted. And substantial wages
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 contribute to the condition that fewer resignations of experienced workers, because they do not want to lose their job.
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, the passive aspect of it is certain that
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 unfair payment is detrimental to the enthusiasm of the staff,
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, work all day with exhaustion, ordinary people only receive meagre wages, while directors who sat on comfortable chairs in their personal offices and paid several times higher. The Only notion emerging in anyone who faced
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 situation is why should I make a contribution to
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 firm, no one could be satisfied with their career without fairness.
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 long-term harm could be exposed to the development potential of the organization. In conclusion, I partly believe that the method of offering very distinguishing financial support to the different levels of workers has some merit, but it damages the future of the company in the end.
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