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Directors of organizations receive higher salaries than the ordinary worker. Some people think it is necessary while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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 that in contemporary society people who possess higher
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 in a company get more desirable
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. Some people think it is acceptable while
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others think
otherwise
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this
 condition is not fair for normal employers. Both given sides will be discussed in
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,
although
 it still has some positive aspects, unequal wages are harmful to the organization in the long run.
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high-level workers may lead to a more productive working environment. Money could be a strong incentive for most employees,
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better material condition, they may work harder to achieve the goal of
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, in order to be promoted. And
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substantial
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also
 contribute to a condition that fewer resignation of experienced workers
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 because they do not want to lose
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 job.
Nevertheless
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 of it
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certainly
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 that
this
 unfair payment is detrimental to the enthusiasm of
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,
for instance
, work all day with exhaustion, ordinary people only receive
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 wages, while directors who sat on
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chair
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chairs
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 in their personal
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offices
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 and paid several times higher.
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 notion emerging in anyone who faced
this
 situation is why should I make
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 to
such
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firm
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, no one could be satisfied with their career without fairness.
Therefore
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long term
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 harm could be exposed to the development potential of the organization. In conclusion, I partly believe that the method of offering very distinguishing financial support to the different level of worker has some merit, but it
damage
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 the future of
company
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 in the end.
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