You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do

Dear Mr Walia, I am one of your customers and recently applied for a new credit
card
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. Yesterday, I received a letter from your Bank asking for
acknowledgement
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an acknowledgement
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of receipt of the
card
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.
However
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, the same is missing from the envelope itself.
Therefore
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, I am writing
this
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letter to express my concern regarding the situation. I got really worried when I saw the envelope and the attached documents. It seemed like the
card
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was torn from the paper itself
and
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, and
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I suspect that it could be misused by someone inappropriately.
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, I would like to request you please consider the incident a priority and take immediate action by blocking any transaction from the
card
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if
gets
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it gets
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activated
in
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at
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some
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any
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time.
Further
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, I would like you to issue a new credit
card
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for me in place of it. I am happy to come in person if you would like to meet me for any
further
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information. I hope you will look into the matter and try to find a solution as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Chandan

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task
Start by saying why you write at once. Briefly tell about the missing card and the next action you want.
coherence
Put ideas in clear steps. Use new paragraph for a new idea. Use short sentences and avoid long, mixed thoughts.
content
Clear aim to show the issue and ask for action.
style
Formal tone and proper closing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
Topic Vocabulary:
  • acknowledge receipt
  • compromised security
  • unauthorized transactions
  • identity theft
  • reissue
  • secure (the account)
  • fraudulent activity
  • account holder
  • security measures
  • customer service
  • follow-up
  • discrepancy
  • escalate the issue
  • trace the delivery
  • account security
  • financial risk
  • confidential
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