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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

#people #university #students #study #subjects #future #science #technology
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education can be attributed to
enormous
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 growth of faculty in
university
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 that
portray
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variety
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a variety
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 of professions for
students
.
However
, some people state that most
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undergraduates should choose the sphere which will be helpful in the future. Others consider that each person
able
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 to select the
subject
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their favorite
his favorite
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favorite
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 for him.
This
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 of
views
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. The
first
 reason why I totally agree with
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first
 statement is each job can bring something important to
this
 world and
for example
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create
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artists
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 can be attractive and
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beautiful
beatiful
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beautiful
 for somebody or might generate
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new ideas in
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people’s
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people’
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 minds.
Other
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 cause why it is important to let
students
 make a decision for the topic of study is
favorite
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 work is more crucial and profitable
then
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than
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pick
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 a
subject
 which is important for
community
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the community
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.
For instance
, many of the
students
 who choose unfavorite work but useful for
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the nation
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 are unhappy and do not make a lot of impact
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 the science or technology spheres.
Although
, the
second
 point of view is useful for
world
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a world
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 that has
multitude
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 of reasons why I disagree with
this
 opinion. The
first
 and main reason is that the new generation of technology is difficult to understand
by
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 undergraduates who do not have abilities in math or computer science .
Moreover
 today notable part of
students
 do not have good grades in math but have great marks in other lessons. The
second
 cause is if
person
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a person
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 does not have
motivation
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the motivation
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 to study
this
subject
, he will not be
professional
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a professional
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 worker in the future.
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,
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 of
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people reclassify to
other job
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 which will be more interesting for them. In conclusion, the reasons that people are able to choose the
subject
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they
want
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 outweigh the causes that undergraduates should study
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scientific courses in universities.
Also
, the profitable sides
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the
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letting teenagers
to
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make
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a decision
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decision
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decisions
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 about
future
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the future
a future
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subject
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subjects
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 are a lot.
Moreover
, that
professions
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profession
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 can
creates
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 something amazing for the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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